A Lost Soul (sorry for being inactive)

Instructions

The reason is school, my book im working on, and lazyness. But i'll give you a sample of chapter one. ^^ Chapter I -Train stopping noises- He looks around the train station then his phone. “I guess I still have time for that café,” said Andrew. -We see him walk into the café, but he bumps into a girl waiter- “Oh!”, says Andrew, “Sorry, I didn’t see you there.” He hurries to help her “I’m quite fine!” said the girl. She looks at him. “I think I’ve seen you before…” Andrew sighs. “Well, I have been here before.” “Really? Sorry, I don’t remember you.” She sheepishly smiled. “That’s okay. I don’t have a memorable face,” said Andrew. -They awkwardly stared at each other, eventually Andrew got tired of it and moved to the counter to order his coffee. We see him sitting at a table drinking the coffee, but he feels a chill on his neck…{rest is censored as scratch might take down this project if they get the wrong idea}- Andrew slowly turned his head to see the same waiter from earlier. He wanted to say something but a feeling in his chest said not to. He stood up and walked out the café. There was no way that waiter did that to me. It was probably the wind…{also censored for same reason}… -Andrew thought about that moment all the way to his house. As he walked up to his door, he finally decided that it was an accident, and that the waiter’s hand wasn’t intended to {censored}. – He opened the door and saw a figure in his house. He slowly creeped up to the figure then the lights turned on. Andrew turned around to see his twin sister, Alessia, next to the light switch and turned back to the figure to see it was his older brother, Benny. “What are you guys doing here!?! I almost had a heart attack…,” said Andrew. Benny rolled his eyes. “What’s wrong with coming to your house, we’re family!” Alessia had yet to say anything. Andrew replied, “Nothing! You just startled me is all…” He hurried them out of the door. “You can come back next week, I promise. I just want to sleep right now ‘k?” he said. Benny was about to protest but Alessia stepped in saying, “Ok, we’ll come next week. See you then.” Alessia looked at Benny, to see that he had nothing to say. That's all i can give you. Also im afraid since my book will cover some serious and sensitive topics in the future i won't be able to give samples of my chapters all the time. Sorry :(