Im done! If there is anything I should add, just tell me :) Script: NIGHT, THUNDERCLAN TERRITORY, NEAR LAKE/ASHFURS DEATH] Hollyleaf stands up(MINIMAL gore on her muzzle), then looks behind her and is shocked. The camera shifts to Squirrelflight, hiding in the bushes, afraid. Squirrelflight gets out and lip-syncs “why do you smile” and Hollyleaf points at Ashfur with her paw and lip-syncs “you have told a secret” Squirrelflight lip-syncs “now you’re telling lies”, but she looks worried, but Hollyleaf snarls.
You can take off the zooming bit in the finished MAP, or change the placement of the zoom, I’m not sure if those are what u had in mind or not
