ok soooooo Ik that I literally JUST posted a project saying that I was leaving for a bit buuuut… I had to. I just had to. but this is not completely random, I have a reason for posting this!!!!!! so yk how I’m trying to get my myself together art-wise? I thought: “well if I’m gonna fix my art, I should get somebody to TELL me what to fix!” so here we are ANYWAYSSSS on to the actual art: 1. Leafpool is not ok. this is actually one of the examples in my art shop that I never posted lol I actually love it sm tho 2. Bright version cuz idk which one I like better :/ 3. AnoTHeR WaRRIORs DrAwINGGggG I love Warriors sm you don’t even knowwww BUT ANYWAYS it’s Brightheart! I love Brightheart I feel like she’s just such an inspiring character :3 I’m so proud of this btw I don’t think Brightheart would actually react that way if someone asked ab her scar but uhh yk Some things I want tips on: - How to improve on anatomy and overall structure ig? Like is there anything you notice ab some aspects of them that just look off or are anatomically incorrect?? - Ok so this might not make ANY sense at all but dk you think theres a way that I could work on making my drawings look more detailed while still looking cartoony and simple? - Anything YOU notice that I could work on improving at? PLEASEEE BE HONEST I WILL NOT BE OFFENDED ALMOST NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY! I would rather you say that one of them is absolute garbage than say it’s amazing and nothing is wrong with it! PLEASE give me the most honest feedback you can!! Art: @Joys_doodles Designs/characters: Erin Hunter Music: none haha #art #critique #feedback #hi
