Skin tone can be made less yellow-y if you want to. No response to bad order, just normal. Shirt should be flowy/loose looking. Left side of hair is longer than right side (when looking at screen directly). The shoulder strap is there in the happy version (it shows in fullscreen).
Thanks for having this contest @LBV_stuff :) Her name doesn't exist, but maybe christina would work? up to @LBV_stuff I don't have a preference really