ToPH Rewritten: Ch. 1

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ToPH is purely by @9rainbowtails. Rewritten version by me. -- Perfectkit stared at the cat. It sparkled like a StarClan cat and was quite nice-looking. "W-who are you?" was all he could mumble out. “Oh yeah, I forgot to say I'm Lostriver, a super cool StarClan cat who completely dislikes this other cat named Shiningstream!” mewed the Lostriver happily. /Wonder what/ her /reason for disliking a cat is/, he thought. He definitely did not like Moonkit for liking Frostface, but what was Lostriver's reason for disliking a cat? "Um, okay? Why am I here?" he asked. "Because I need to tell you're important in a prophecy thingy," replied Lostriver. /Prophecy? Me?/ he suddenly thought to himself. /Wait till I tell Moonkit and Tansykit!/ "What is it?" he asked. "/Don't be blinded by the one claiming he's perfect, he still is a normal cat. But be weary and warned that if you banish him from his home. The Clans may face a tragic war./" Lostriver's eyes were shining. "Goodbye, kit!" "Huh?" He woke up, a bit shaken from his weird dream-vision thingy. "Sunnysong! Your kit woke up," yelled Nightfang. "Ugh, Dad, why did you have to wake me up?! I was in the middle of a dream," mumbled Perfectheart. "Huh? I thought you, Moonkit and Tansykit were all adopted?" "No dad-" he sighed, "Ah, forget it." He sighed again. /Should I tell Frostface about my vision?/ As he was exiting the nursery, Moonkit stopped him suddenly. Was he in trouble for something? Maybe sleeping in? "Hey, where are you going Perfectkti?" she asked. "Off to tell Frostface something. None of your beeswax," he added when she opened her mouth." "Hmph. You're probably going to tell him he's evil again. How many times do I have to say? He's not evil!" "He's evil and you know it! Now let me go." He shoved her out of his way and treaded over to the medicine cat den. Frostface was busy sorting herbs and mixing some stuff. "Hey Frostface, can I tell you something?" he asked. "It better not be "You're evil" again," Frostface warned. "It's not. I had a prophecy." "What a load of mouse-droppings. Kits don't have prophecies." "It's true!" "It's not!" "Leave me alone, Perfectkit!" Frostface yelled. Perfectkit left. /Ugh, why does Frostface have to be so mean and EVIL./ (END)