it's finally done!! sorry for the wait ^^; (scroll all the way down if you don't want to read the whole thing loll) my handwriting may be a little hard to read, so i'll list all the slides and talk about them a little here!! :D 1. Intro slide I actually didn't have a lot to say haha!! your human drawings are actually SUPER AMAZING ALREADY WHATT >:00 you'll be drawing epic awesome full human art pieces in no time!! >:DDD 2. add more layers to the hair to make it fluffier!! this is to give the hair more depth and less flat 3. round the shoulders off a little more!! the left arm (the characters right arm) was a little thick + I added the collarbone for more detail :DDD 4. Original! <33 5. Critique ver :DD 6. this is about the poses, I noticed the torso was a bit too long/legs were a bit too short, (the heat+torso and leg ratio should be about 1:1) + shoulders and hips were too parallel (I REALLY LOVE THE PERSPECTIVE ON THE RIGHT POSE A LOT <333) 7. I kinda redrew the poses to show how the posting can be made better!! "not parallel (?) shoulder - hip lines make a more dynamic pose :)" "IDK how to explain it haha :'D" 8. outro slide + THANKS FOR ASKING ME TO CRITIQUE!! it genuinely means a lot to me that you love my artt+ i'm so so happy i'm able to help you improve <3333 GOOD LUCK ON YOUR ART JOURNEY!! >:DDD original art by @TheGameMaker0721 !!
