Cuandos Eres Lesbiana REMAKE (ITS HAPPENING :D )

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I'ma do typing here cause Scratch typing is hard lol. I'll try to keep it brief but also I'm a yapper :) (From future me: I did NOT keep it short lmao) So yes, this is true. I'm going to try to revamp Cuandos Eres Lesbiana, the queer short story I wrote TWO YEARS AGO, apparently TuT. I'll be changing to title to simply When You're Lesbian, which is just the English translation of the original title, but it felt weird having a Spanish title when neither I nor any of the characters were Spanish or ever spoke Spanish. It's just not necessary so yea. Right now, all I've done is made a character form for each character (partly visible in the image) and summarized the plot of each chapter. My plans are to expand on the original story with better pacing, more dynamic characters, more detailed plot + subplot, and just better writing in general (and less TYPOS. Reading through the old chapters was WILD °_°). Currently, I'd like it to be extended to 15 chapters at least, (which was my goal for the original as well, but I went faster than I needed to due to fear of losing motivation), still keeping about the same amount of chapters for the main plot (11 in the original) but having others be for a subplot perhaps expanding more on Lex and Lily's relationship, Pap and Dad's relationship, school, or that one friend Lyra I introduced and never mentioned again lol. I'd also like to have a prologue and epilogue separate from the 15 chapters. All this is subject to change, but a guy can dream TuT. Speaking of Lyra, I may be changing around the characters a bit. There are a lot of L names, for example, so that might be a bit different. There may be more or less characters in the remake, but that's a while-writing thing really. I may also age everyone up a bit, just bc I can lol. Also, new refs! Some I may draw myself if I feel like it, but most will be Picrews I plan to write the remake on Google Docs instead of right on Scratch, as Google Docs is much easier to use for writing like this, and I can actually do markdown things like italics (you may have noticed in the original I used /these/ sometimes, those were to show italics TuT). I'll take screenshots and upload them to Scratch; this will also make it easier to make mobile friendly, as it'll all be one thing you can tap anywhere. Hopefully this works and Scratch doesn't botch it, cause formatting a long Scratch text box is HARD ToT "But Cloudripple," you say, "aren't you forgetting something? Something also related to this?" And to that, I say NO :D! Don't think I've forgotten about that sequel story I started but unofficially discontinued, Since Then. I stopped writing that because I wrote myself into a very challenging situation that I couldn't figure out how to continue, and then I left Scratch for a while, so it got left hanging. I have no promises with that, but don't expect any new chapters as it's old and makes me cringeeeee worse than Cuandos Eres Lesbiana. I have no time frame for when you can expect the first chapter of this oh-so-eloquently-described remake, as I am well aware of my own time blindness and procrastination skills (and also I can't predict the future to know how busy I'll be and how fast I'll write lol). But I want to say that after the first chapter is posted, there'll be a new one every Thursday (bc Thursdays are great why not (: ). BUT still, no promises. Don't believe a word I say when talking about time and planning. Just check my profile occasionally ig lol