Revamp idea for The Chronicles
I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you. My mother and grandmother both got cancer, so I have been swamped with life. It might be a good idea to redo the project, keeping the story but editing the text for spelling and grammar errors and fleshing out the text a bit. I think we should slow down with the beginning because it feels rushed, we skip the apprentice, warrior, and leader ceremonies which are usually big parts in the warriors books. If we slow down the story and make the plot thicker while adding a bit of filler stuff, we could make it a much more compelling story to read. Additionally, we could add a link to the next section to make it easier for readers to continue.
