A short story - I don't think it needs too much explanation. This is one that I'm very proud of. Also, you may have notices that I've added fancy new cover pages to my projects (and changed my icon). Let me know if you like them! Critiques & comments are welcome, but please no stealing or rude comments. Also, in-depth critiques are best - it helps if you tell me what you did and didn't like about my story :) The song is "First Step on the Surface" by Adam Young.
