*Movie starts with a black screen Black fades out showing applehead's inbox with one message Message reads: I'm coming for you* What the- what is happening? Who is this kid? *New message reading: Your greatest nightmare.* Heh... this must be a joke... *You will suffer my wrath. You will bend to my will. This "joke" will ruin you.* What the heck? How does he know what I'm thinking? *New message, 5 days later: From 858anm24: What's going on with this bully?* *I'm not even sure anymore.* *Well, if you need any help, I'm here.* *Thank you so much!* *Np :)* The next day, 858anm24 confronts the bully, now identified as slooshie *Hey, why are you being so mean to applehead?* *Not rude, in power.* *Idk if you think this is cool, but bullying is 100% wrong.* *Not bullying. He will wilt at the sight of my power* 858 thinks to himself: Who is this guy? *You can't keep being mean to him.* *Watch me.* *Why him of all people?* *He's an easy target.* An hour later, applehead's profile *So, he really wants to destroy me?* *I fear so. I couldn't stop him.* *Well, you tried your best.* *I'm sorry I couldn't do any better.* *You did well. We have information now.* *Fair enough, but info can only do so much.* *Yeah. We have info, but what do we do with it?* *We fight, applehead. We fight.* The next day, 858 and applehead gather an army to face slooshie, not knowing of their pending doom. *Well applehead, we're ready.* *We're gonna win this, I know it!* The troops charge into battle, and slooshie is armed with only a baseball bat. *Only a bat? This will be a cakewalk.* *Uh, 858?* They turn to see the troops being picked off one by one, smacked and battered with the bat. *Uhh... that's bad...* *We're severely unprepared.* *applehead, he's getting really close...* Soldiers are lying on the field, completely defeated. Applehead and 858 are the only soldiers that can still fight. *Slooshie, it's me you want, so come and get me!* *No, I have a better idea.* Slooshie grabs 858 by the arm and starts hitting him full force with the bat. *WHY ARE YOU HURTING HIM??* *I said you would suffer. And I'm doing just that to you.* Slooshie raises the bat right over 858's head, and the camera cuts to applehead's horrified face right before impact. *See you soon. And next time, you won't be so lucky.* 1 day later, Hospital of Scratch. Applehead is visiting 858. *We lost 27 soldiers to injuries and bans.* 858 has a concussion so bad that he can't speak, but he turns pale. *Too many, I know. Next time, we'll be prepared.* 858 goes into a coma, and doesn't wake up for a week. However, when he does wake up, his eyes flame purple. He has no intention to lose again, and neither does applehead. END OF PART 1
When I write, I tend to use more dialogue than normal books
