I tear apart my old stories

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I swear I'm not dead anyway doing this because it seems fun I've always enjoyed making comics. I was not good at it though. So I will be tearing apart my old comics for an audience because I don't like them. This is in order of their scratch debuts Flight of the Moonlark This was just a comic form of Keeper of the Lost Cities. The art for this was insanely bad because it was made in Scratch vector. All of the plot inconsistencies in this were also in the book it was copied from. However I did it very cringilly, and the art was horrible. The Traitor A copy of @Berricake 's Scratch Murder Mystery Series but with cats. This was very bad. It got released to scratch as an animation. In writing the main character was named Keefe (sound familiar?) and dogs had violently taken over the world, so a large group of cats (somewhere between 6 and 12) hides in a cave. One is a full-grown one that hurt his eye during his time in the army or smth, one's just some guy, he's interested in Keefe, I don't remember what injury he had, but he definitely had one. I think his name was Thresh or smth. He was either in love with or best friends with Dawn, a healer. Then there was Melly, she was pregnant. Finally, there was Lillian, Keefe's best friend who he had a crush on (fun fact Lillian in SitD was literally just stolen from this comic because she was the only one I still liked at the end). So, yeah, I don't remember much other than characters, this was posted as an animation on my alt. But here's what I remember (you get some of the comic version too) Keefe is playing around and gets given a leaf. Then he goes hunting with star where he throws up because he ate the leaf. then tired, he goes to bed, because it's night. He wakes up to screaming. Oh no, Dawn's been poisoned!!! why is she screaming because of the death berries hidden in her rabbit that she ate? we don't know. Star was the one who gave her the rabbit so Thresh attacks him and ruins his other eye, Oh no! and then he believes star about not knowing about the rabbit. Then Melly gives birth to 12 kits, one being birdbird, and one being bugbug who has six legs (guess who these are copies of)Then Keefe and Lillian hang out outside the cave and meet some other cats. Lillian goes to join the clans. Then when Keefe gets back 2 of Melly's babies get squished under a boulder that falls from a cliff in the cave(don't even ask, I don't know) then Keefe hits his head trying to save them. That's as far as I got. Guess who the murderer is? it's Melly SitD(the first version) There is now a new version that is here on scratch but not caught up where I fix some things, along with better art and humans instead of cats. Check out Stepping into the Dark on Webtoons if you haven't already, but uhhh anyways. Soooo this girl named moon is out getting strawberries with her best friend Lillian. Moon is an orphan who lives in an orphanage with Lillian. Moon hates it there. Moon does not remember her parents. She and Lillian argue about whether to go back to the orphanage. They go back. Lady Lion, who is very evil and hates loaf sitting, sends them to their room. Moon loaf sits. Lillian eats her strawberries. Moon later gets grounded for loaf sitting. While locked in her room she sees a strange shape in the sky. she falls out of the window. Then Lillian falls on her (having appeared out of nowhere), Lillian says the shape is a dragon, and then the dragon lands in front of them. Cloud, Lillian´s brother, is riding the dragon. Moon is freaked out by the dragon, and finds Cloud to be pretty. Then some weird randomness of Moon´s backstory. I hate the fact that she´s a princess SO MUCH but it´s ingrained too deep in her lore for me to tear it out without completely rewriting her. This is why she is still one in version 3. They go to the magical country moon is from for some reason. (Not warning Moon that it´s dangerous and she´s wanted) Where they get captured because Cloud ratted out Lillian to their mum, who for some reason is Lady Lion, who is both the tyrant who killed Moon´s parents and is queen of this land AND the lady who ran the orphanage Moon was in, who somehow didn´t realize Moon was Moon until her daughter realized. Also it somehow wasnt revealed that the owner of the orphanage Moon grew up in was her best friend´s mother in all their time knowing eachother. ANYWAYS Lady Lion offers that she might let Moon go if Moon can impress her at the ball she´s hosting that night. So they go to the dungeons and Cloud is sent to guard them. There are other cats in the dungeon, one of them being Cloud´s ex, so he pretends Moon is his girlfriend. Then Lillian makes a portal to the void so they can get dress wear for the ball. During that time Cloud basically takes a bullet for Moon and messes up his eye. Then Moon receives some gift bread, and they go to the ball. However theye dressed too well and are outshining Lady Lion, so she sends her guards to get rid of them. (cont)