The first time I’ve ever received meaningful feedback. I will focus on these faults specifically: Intention (too many art/components) No story Clutter (too much detail) A lazy transition (red frame) Absolutely no immersion (I understand what he meant) Filler sections (Last two sections) Not committing (I was afraid of the AMV idea because it required a character, so after I failed, I took a detour.) Self-Esteem (And I thought this was good! I tried not to push myself too hard, and overlooked all these errors.) Succumbing to burnout (If I want to consistently animate, burnout should not be a factor, the last two sections were absolutely pathetic due to lack of motivation and tiredness from the hand animations. Yet again, it’s the positive mindset that didn’t push me.) Bad color pallete, hyper focus on composition, and no knowledge of color theory (I now see something that lacks in my AMVs, color. No more flashy color pallets and in between colors, screw it. I will study color theory, it’s my fault for not learning beforehand. I focus too much on composition, easing, and art.) Takeaway: Stop being redundant, burnout isn’t an excuse, learn color theory, fix your priorities, give your creations meaning.
I need more feedback like this, this I what I refer to when I say feedback. Lmao
