Did not care for how Beta was portrayed in part 1
So after reading part 1 many times over. I might redo the whole thing... That's right. Whole. Thing. Im not happy with how it turned out, and it's definitely not what I wanted, SO I'll see how part 2 goes. If that flops too, then I am redoing everything. I want Beta to reach the heart of many and to be that character that people can adore. Not... some trauma machine. So, bear with me here as I decide what to do!
