Click the space bar for next slide Please give me your feedback for this. I need to know how I did and what I should fix (spelling wise…).
The part that says “i could tell she didn’t want to be here.” should also (at the end) say “she wanted to be with her mom” Also if u see it as it starts w/ “that’s when I heard the knocking”, imma let u know that that’s supposed to be the ending.
