My name is Aqua Faerun, and at the age of 22, I have conquered an empire. It took a whole lot of magic, but I won. I have ruled the empire for 6 years now. I think something is wrong. I have this nagging voice in my head. This would seem normal, except that the voice is not mine. I have been trying to understand what it is saying, but it is nonsense. "...Up...we need you to...please, Antonia." It has gotten worse. I have lost all control of my magic and it is so annoying. "Uhh... Miss? The army is invading and we need backup." I forgot about the war. It's been haunting me. "Okay. I'll go." "Are you sure? It is very dangerous." "I'm sure." An hour later, I'm out on the battlefield. I have taken down 15 enemies, and the number is only growing. I am afraid that we will lose. A spear strikes me in the stomach. Is this the end? The voice in my head is now clearly audible. "Antonia, wake up. We need you to wake up. Antonia! Please!" I gasp. "Where am I?" Three faces loom over me. "Antonia! You are alive!" "Who are you? Who am I?" The woman in front of me sighs. "Sweetheart, we're your family. You are Antonia Lawrence." As she says that, memories come rushing back. "Mom! Dad! I love you. But... How did I get here?" "You collapsed for some reason. You've been out for a week." "Where are my friends?" "You were there. Don't you remember the incident?" I remembered. I suddenly remember something new. My friends, whispering. "Don't let anyone know. You are now a vampire."
I need somebody to make the beginning better. (Up until she wakes up. And a better last name than Lawrence.