This was cancelled due to a lack of script revisions and just bordem making it.
Draft: Hi! I'm Pillia the Pie! And it's finally time for me to go to Toon University! I've always wanted to go there since I was a little Pie slice! It's one step closer to a spot at Gardenview! One of the BEST places to be if you want to be successful! The people there make so much money filming what they like, I hope to be there too! After getting ready to go and packing everything up, my mother came into the room! “Are you sure you want to do this, Pillia?” she said to me, “The people who made it never really got to see the outside of Gardenview itself, that country could be dangerous!” I thought Mom was crazy! This is my NUMBER ONE dream in the world, and if I really wanted to, I could do it FOREVER!! “Oh, Mom!” I said, "You'll realize soon enough that I can succeed! You just have to see that!” “I'm not saying you can't,” she responds back, “I'm saying that you should keep your eye out for anything that's suspicious! Ok?” “Alright, I love you Mom” I finished off. “I love you too," she says. She's probably just worried about me on my own, I'm not complaining, I'm scared too. I've never really been on my own since…Dad. But that's besides the point, i realized that ive been walking to the but stop to University!. “Toon University!” The driver said, right before I got on I heard footsteps. “WAIT!!! WAIT FOR ME!!!!!” the voice said, right before bumping into me, of course. “Oh, sorry Pillia! I was in a rush and I closed my eyes and I never saw you and- ""It's fine, Ducky.” I say as we both get on the bus. “I can't believe we actually got this close to Gardenview!” Ducky says to me, “Yeah! This is gonna be GREAT!!!” I responded back. Ducky was always loud and proud, and that's why we were friends! Ever since we were lil babies we've been together forever! Ducky always spoke about cool things she does and I'm just in awe! (She probably makes that stuff up though) “It might be great for you..” a voice cuts in, “I'm only doing this cause my sisters already IN Gardenview, I just don't want to feel left out” they continue back with. I looked beside me a few feet away to see a blue poker chip, they had a nice dress and had blue hair. “My name's Trunix, by the way” they say, “He/Him” he states. “Nice to meet you, Trunix! I'm Pillia! And this little feathery friend here is Ducky!” I exclaim, “Hello!!!!” Ducky loudly says to Trunix, “It's nice to meet you both, say, I must ask. Why is there a chunk of your head missing?” He asks, “Oh uh…” I try to think of a reason beyond less strange than the ACTUAL reason. “I had it… at birth??” I answer to Trunix. “Woah, pretty cool! My right eye is kinda scared so I guess we can relate to one side of us being a bit strange! Huh?” “Uh, yeah I guess if you wanna see it like that!” Ducky responds abruptly. After that we talked for a bit, slept, woke up to see that we were finally there! It was a big openfield with so much stuff! I was so dazed by the scenery and the things I could do that I bumped into someone, “Watch where you're going, 3⁄4 'ths!” as everybody started laughing in a circle. “Hey! Leave her alone! She didn't mean it!” Ducky says as she pushes me to the front room. “Thanks, Duk” I said to Ducky, “No probs, I don't like what they did to you!” Things like this are why me and Ducky are best friends! We went up to the line of people at the front desk, after a while it was me and Ducky's turn. “302, here are the keys” a box said, they looked like they were hiding from something. I didnt pay much attention cause when me and Ducky got the keys respectively we both rushed into the door, it was like a race! “I WON!” Ducky says as she makes it into the door, “What?! This isn't a RACE!” I say as I realize what I was thinking before contradicts what I just said, “It sure did feel like one!” Ducky responds with. “Oh well! Training starts tomorrow!” I say to Ducky, “What time is it right now?” Ducky asks, “Well we haven't eaten yet and it's 9:23 and I'm kinda tired and-” when I turn to where Ducky used to be, she wasn't there, “I'M GOING TO THE LUNCH ROOM!!” Ducky yells as she goes down the stairs. “DUCKY!!! WAIT FOR ME!!!” I say as I run down too. END OF PART ONE.
