Please read the gathering thread as well, it will help with your tone! you can also do multiple recordings for the same lines to convey different emotions. Please record everything in a remix or it wont be counted. I will ping you every few days so you don't forget! thanks! 1. (this is my personal favorite) Heartshatter shouldve never been leader. she doesnt have the //HEART// for it, i'd say. 2. No leader would be that emotional. acting like a kit, crying, crying every gathering 3. you dont have any wrong or problematic points 4. peace is difficult to have when a certain //cat// is causing discomfort by just showing Ae's presence here..infront of me 5. You still homed them, they tried to k1// peahen and that wasnt a good thing. your (you're) lucky im a medic, if i wasnt you'd be ripped up by now 6. peahen has never deserved death, ive had to do things to just protect her from dying, these cats are just fulled with greed, wanting to be leader 7. Serves you right