click/arrow keys critique notes (slide 2 with the sketch) (1) the left eye was too low (2) not sure if you're intentionally going for a very round head style, but if not, adding a slight corner to indicate a jawline can be good! also defining the muzzle a little more so it's not just a floating nose + mouth Also the head was too big--another thing that may be a stylistic choice but relative to the other proportions i don't think that was your intent? idk though (3) added shoulders and moved the elbows out a little so the arms aren't so stiff (4) the hind section was a little small (5) poses like this are hard lol but it can help to draw the whole leg even if it gets cut off in the end if the cat's "knee" is facing us it would get foreshortened/overlap the hip a bit hope this helps! :]
