Next: N/A Previous: ??? First: You're here lol Hi guys :D! I finally decided to post the Storyboards that I've made for Dreamscape (so far). I will release these every 3 chapters. ALSO, some of these storyboards I started after making some of the chapter already, so some of these start around the middle of the chapter. Below is all of the text in every chapter: _CHAPTER 17_ 1. 2. 3. Firekit: "It's fine, just-" 4. Ravenkit, thinking: "Calm down, you're just going to see Mom" 5. 6. Firekit: "Hey, Ravenkit!" 7. Ravenkit: "Hi, Firekit! Hi, Icekit! What are you two talking about?" 8. 9. Firekit: "Well..." 10. Icekit: "Sorry, but it's a secret." 11. 12. 13. Firekit: "Wait, Ravenkit, aren't you meant to be in the medicine den?" 14. 15. Ravenkit: "Oh, yeah, Ambersight let me hang out with Pebblekit." 16. Icekit: "But he was really mad last time you left the medicine den?" 17. Ravenkit: "I have permission this time, it'll be *fine*." 18. Icekit nods 19. Nothing? Ravenkit should be talking there. 20. 21. Bit of a jump cause I figured out the pages actual order lol 41. Back with Pebblekit 42. 43. Pebblekit: "Hey, Dappledkit." 44. Dappledkit: "What is it?" 45. Pebblekit: "Me and Ravenkit are going to go through this exit." 46. Pebblekit: "Could you make sure Icekit and Firekit don't know?" 47. Dappledkit nods 48. Pebblekit: "Great! Thanks!" 49. 50. 51. 52. 53. 54. What it looks like to cross 55. Pebblekit: "Well, who's going down first?" 56. Ravenkit: "Not it" Pebblekit: "Not it" 57. 58. 59. 60. 60 (actually 61, labeled as 60). 61. 62. Ravenkit: "PEBBLEKIT!" 63. 64. 65. 66. Ravenkit: "Let go." 67. Pebblekit: "WHAT DO YOU MEAN, "LET GO"? DO YOU WANT TO *KILL ME*?" 68. Ravenkit: "I'm *trying* to save you!" 69. 70. 71. 72. 73. 74. Ravenkit: "Your welcome." 75. Pebblekit: "My claw hurts." 76. Ravenkit: "I'm sure it's not *that* bad. Deal with it." 77. 78. 79. 80. 81. Pebblekit: “Are you leading?” 82. Ravenkit: “If you think you’re going to fall again.” 83. 84. 85. Pebblekit: “We should follow their scent! Like the warriors do with prey!” 86. Ravenkit: “We could try…” 87. Pebblekit: “Let’s go, then!” 88. 89. 90. Pebblekit: "There they are!" 91. 92. 93. 94. 95. Pebblekit: "They smell weird!" _THE END_ Of Chapter 17 _Chapter 18_ 1. 2. Buzzardwood: "I hope the same doesn't happen to your kits, considering how Treestar can be." 3. Buzzardwood: "I'm sure they're great," 4. Buzzardwood: "Just as long as they're nothing like you." 5. Cloverfluff: "Stop, Buzzardwood." 6. Cloverfluff: "Remember, she just *killed* Feathernose." 7. Buzzardwood: "Yeah, I agree." 8. 9. 10. Treestar: "What happened?" Skipping to later in the chapter :3 11. 12. 13. Blossomlightning: "This was you, wasn't it?" 14. Blossomlightning (offscreen): "Scarred one?" 15. Blossomlightning: "Wow, you sure are stupid." 16. Mintsnout: "Huh?" 17. Blossomlightning: "Just killing him in front of everyone?" 18. Blossomlightning: "You're sure to get yourself exiled, at best." 19. Blossomlightning: "At worst, probably killed." 20. Blossomlightning: "You should be ashamed, y'know?" 21. Blossomlightning (offscreen): "Normally a cat would be, but you only seem to care about what happens to-" 22. Blossomlightning (offscreen): "You." 23. 24. Stonedusk: "C'mon, *Mintsnout*. We're going." 25. _THE END_ Of Chapter 18 _ORIGINAL_ Chapter 19_ 1. 2. 3. Cloverfluff: "Treestar?" 4. Treestar: "What?" 5. Cloverfluff: "What if Flintstar... doesn't do anything?" 6. 7. Treestar: "Then we will." 8. Treestar: "She deserves to pay for what she did." _NEW (and current)_ Chapter 19_ 1. 2. 3. 4. Pebblekit: "Raven... come on." 5. Pebblekit: "We need to get back to camp before we get in trouble." 6. Ravenkit: "I know." 7. Ravenkit: "But why did she do this?" 8. Pebblekit: "Everyone has their(s) reasons, Ravenkit." 9. Pebblekit: "For now, we just need to get back and see what happens." 10. 11. Pebblekit: "...We need to run." 12. Ravenkit: "I know, just-" 13. Pebblekit: "Hey! Just hang in there until we are back to camp." 14. Ravenkit: "Alright." 15. 16. 17. 18. 19. Pebblekit: "*Hide*!" 20. 21. 22. Pebblekit: "We need to hurry!" 23. More Running (I was too lazy to draw it lol) 24. 25. Ravenkit: "We got here before them..." 26. Pebblekit: "Mouse-dung! How are we going to get back across?!" 27. Ravenkit: "Uh-" 28. Ravenkit: "I don't know." 29. 30. Pebblekit: "Maybe there's a way in through the leader's, warriors, or medicine den?" 31. Pebblekit: "Wait- no leader's den. She's always sulking in there." 32. 33. 34. Ravenkit: "Well, we need to be in the medicine den." 35. Ravenkit: "So we should find an entrance in there!" 36. Pebblekit: "Oh yeah." 37. Pebblekit: "But what if Ambersight already noticed we are gone?" 38. Pebblekit: "Especially after last time..." 39. Ravenkit: "Don't worry about that right now." 40. Ravenkit: "We just need to get back into camp." 41. 42. 43. Pebblekit: "We are *NOT* doing this again." 44. Ravenkit: "You're right." 45. Ravenkit: "We're jumping!" cont. in Notes
46. Pebblekit: "*NO!*" 47. 48. 49. Ravenkit: "See? Easy." 50. Pebblekit: "Fine." 51. 52. 53. 54. 55. 56. 57. 58. Pebblekit: "Ambersight isn't here." 59. Ravenkit: "No 'thanks'?" 60. Ravenkit: "I've saved your life twice." 61. Pebblekit: "Sorry about that... thanks." 62. (offscreen, unknown): "...huh?" 63. Pouncepaw: "What are you two talking about?" 64. Pouncepaw: "And Ravenkit, why is your wound bleeding again?" 65. Ravenkit: "I-" 66. Pouncepaw (offscreen): "Nevermind that, you should go check what is going on out there." 67. Pouncepaw: "It seems to be about Mintsnout." 68. Ravenkit: "Thanks, Pouncepaw." 69. + more FloodClan cats _THE END_ Of Chapter 19 And that's that :D! If any of you want, you can make a side-by-side comparison of the storyboards vs. the actual chapter, but I personally (probably) won't. ALSO, in later Storyboards, I might update the text to be readable without having to go into the desc, but that's a maybe. I hope you enjoyed looking at my little sketchbook :D!
