ok so wth is this I really need help with writing, formatting, and expanding ideas. anyone up for it???? ( song ish poem stuff ) ------------------------------------ it was a dark dark night, rainy and stormy, lighting without the thunder I still can remember it, and yet, I still cant admit the cries, both pain and grief its beyond horrendous all I can say is that I was nervous the day you left me. or should I say I did. why would I do that, angels too afraid to look at the aftermath the sins, death in my hands never fullfilled your demands eyes full of lust as you bleed it feeds me, as your knee is bashed would you forgive me if I? did it all again replace the gore with more love, heal what's broken? or no, its too much of a token to afford can I restart? tell you I would die for you? pray by your grave maybe it was your fate you cant stop it, that's what you'd say resort to kindness, from heartless to generous