- The story of UTA - Click / Space ———— Hello, Since UTA is discounted, I would like to explain what could’ve happened if I continued and what changes I could make. Let’s dive. \_~_/ Full Story Explained: As you might’ve known from the start, Honeypaw obviously likes Smokepaw. Honeypaw gets jealous of Dandelionpaw. The apprentices become warriors, Honeypaw becomes Honeyfall, Smokepaw is Smokewhisper, Frostpaw is Frostbite and Nightpaw is Nightheart. In RiverClan, Dandelionpaw becomes Dandelionleaves, Goldenpaw becomes Goldenrod ans Amaryllispaw becomes Amaryllisflower. Honeyfall tries to kill Dandelionleaves but fails, Smokewhisper distants himself from Honeyfall. Soon, Dandelionleaves gives birth to two kits, Honeyfall is really angry and tries to kill both of the kits. Springpaw becomes Springfield Ohio (just kidding, only Springfield) and Snowbeam gives birth to two kits as well, Snowbeam is exiled for having a cross-clan relationship and for having a mate and kits as a medicine cat. Springfield has a small crush on Amaryllisflower but that’s a crappy side story. Nightheart and Frostbite become mates and they have kits, I don’t remember how many though- A shadowy Dark Forest cat manipulates Honeyfall. In the end, Honeyfall tries to murder everyone, she kills Nightheart, Nightheart’s kits, Frostbite, Dandelionleaves and one of her kits. Smokewhisper is depresso and pushes Honeyfall off a cliff. There ya go. — Changes I would make: 1. Pebblepool wouldn’t be related to Cloudfern, I had a problem with the family tree, I didn’t want Nightheart and Frostbite to be related. 2. Smokewhisper should probably have a personality and so does Frostbite and Nightheart. 3. Springfield needs to be less of a Mary-Sue 4. Honeyfall shouldn’t be too crazy, I think people are glorifying yanderes too much in comics and in real life. 5. A war between clans 6. Delete the prophecy cats and the ??? shadowy cat. In the end, I’d change lots of things (probably the whole plot) but overall, that is it. Thanks for viewing - Fish
