critique notes (slide 2) (1) felt like there was a little too much distance between nose + mouth (2) chest was a little shallow--the whole chest/forelegs section also seemed a little too far back underneath him (3) forepaw bent the wrong way, usually the front part isn't concave unless it's a pretty extreme flexing pose (4) added ankles to feet (and "thumb" on forepaw) (5) elbow was a little low, usually it sits at the same level as the stomach on a normal-weight cat (6) tail was a little stiff & the end had a big slice in it through the fur on the tailtip, I usually go for smaller fur tufts to avoid looking like there's a missing chunk (unless the fur is purposely super stylized, and even then i try to avoid taking chunks out of the body lol) (7) The thighs were a little small/high hope it helps!!
