hii this is my first original song i'll be sharing here!!! i mixed it in soundtrap and recorded it with my macbook :) (if anything sounds bad.. its probably intentional lol i did a lot of crazy things for this project lol) Verse 1 I can’t take it Can’t take your hand There is a strong wall Stopping our hands from collapsing together Your mom’s sweater surrounds you And there’s nothing I can do Chorus Bluejay, bluejay-ay-ay-ay-ay Bluejay, bluejay-ay-ah-ah-ah-ay Bluejay, bluejay-ay-ay-ay-ay Bluejay, bluejay, a new day Verse 2 I hold the door The one you walk through There is a long pause Awkward and silent, conversation strained. He grabs your hand And there's nothing I can do. ____ ARTIST CORNER (feel free to skip :3) pros (imo) - lyricsss!!! i think i did a good job with the vibesss i was going for: experimental, angsty, ykwim!! cons :/ - the vocals couldve been better. the chorus is a lilttle pitchy and the rest of it is wavery and i gotta get better at that. i do think the chorus isnt too bad bc that pitchy feel is really common for the style im trying to do, its kinda rebellious like olivia rodrigo vibes.. idk.. _____ OVERALL I think it turned out pretty well!! lmk what yall think :) alsooo i probably won't post any more original songs bc i want to release them on other platforms but im not quite sure yet. anywayyy thats all :)
