Leader's rock and clearing In scene: Stormstar, Clearwater, Dustfur, Brightpelt, Mistybreeze, Redkit, Dawnkit, Leafkit, Dirtkit, Briarkit, Fernkit, Mottlekit, more Thumb: Dawnkit standing timidly in front of an angy snake with Redkit and Dirtkit watching behind a rock 1. [Same scene as slide 15 of chapter 2] 2. [View on Leader's stump] Stormstar: Blah blah blah, ceremonial death stuff, blah blah, blah, nobody cares. 3. [View on the cats around his body] Brightpelt: He was an amazing littermate. He always encouraged me and Dustpelt. 4. Dustpelt: He never seemed to be jealous of us, even when he failed his warrior's assessment. 5. Mistybreeze: He always tried hard to succeed, even as a kit. He always brightened everyone's day, even as a kit. 6. Clearwater: I couldn't ask for a better mate. 7. [View back on the Leader's stump] Stormstar: Great, nobody cares. 8. [angry commotion] 9. Stormstar: Whatever, Sunpaw needs a new mentor. Fruitedclaw, our kits are almost 6 moons, you'll be his mentor. 10. Some cat: Do the proper ceremony! 11. Stormstar: Clan dismissed. 12. [View change, Redkit, Dawnkit, and Dirtkit are facing Leafkit, Fernkit, Briarkit, and Mottlekit] Redkit: We had this idea. 13. Dawnkit: We should go fight that snake to be apprenticed early! 14. Dirtkit: I'm tired of waiting! 15. Fernkit: You'll get yourselves killed! 16. Mottlekit: If Swiftlight couldn't take it, you can't! 17. Briarkit: I'd like to see you try. 18. Leafkit: That's a mouse-brained idea! 19. Dirtkit: Fine, be that way, you bunch of mouse-hearts! 20. Redkit: Rule followers! 21. Dawnkit: You guys are so scared! 22. Mottlekit: We're being sensible! 23. Briarkit: You have bees in your brains! 24. Fernkit: See how Stormstar reacts when it's his own kits he has to sit vigil for! 25. Leafkit: How do you think Brightpelt will feel if her littermate and one of her kits are dead? 26. Dawnkit: We're going anyway, and you can't stop us!
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