Clearing In scene: Redkit, Dawnkit, Dirtkit, Stormstar, Starlingberry, Leafkit, Fernkit, Sootkit, Fruitedclaw, more Thumb: At the camp entrance, Dirtkit holding Dawnkit's body by the scruff, Redkit in a friendzy, likely wailing for help 1. [Literally just the thumb] Redkit: DAWNKIT'S BEEN BITTEN! 2. [Clearing full of cats le gasp] 3. [Approaching the 3 kits] Stormstar: What were you doing out of camp? 4. [In a comedic way Starlingberry pushes Stormstar out of the way] 5. [Leafkit, Fernkit, and Sootkit follow] Starlingberry: This is why kits aren't allowed out of camp! 6. [Starlingberry administers poppy seeds to Dawnkit] Sootkit: Thyme, right? 7. Starlingberry: Yes, Sootkit, give them thyme. 8. [Sootkit gives thyme to Dirtkit] Starlingberry: I don't want to be harsh to a dying kit, but your father's right. 9. [And to Redkit] Starlingberry: Redkit, Dirtkit, I hope you two never pull a stunt like this again. 10. [On Dawnkit, who's lying supine] Dawnkit: I have a few things to say before I go. 11. [Different angle, pointing up at Leafkit from Dawnkit's body, see ref] Dawnkit: Leafkit, you were the bestest friend a cat could have. I wish we had the chance to be mates. 12. [Same angle] (Offscreen) Fruitedclaw: How dare you! 13. [11 but it's pointing at Fernkit] Dawnkit: I know you loved me as much as Leafkit did, but I never reciprocated your feelings. I hope you find a cat that loves you. (Please please please add foreshadowing here that Fernkit will die in 8 moons from a branch, maybe a whoosh in the trees and a looming branch) 14. [Same thing but at Redkit] Dawnkit: Redkit, you were an amazing sister. Don't let this moment drag you down. 15. [At Dirtkit] Dawnkit: Dirtkit, don't blame yourself. It isn't your fault. 16. [At Fruitedclaw and Stormstar] Dawnkit: You two are the worst homophobic parents ever. I hope you both get sent to the Dark Forest sometime soon. 17. (le gasp from both) 18. [Back to 10] Dawnkit: Goodbye everyone. 19. [View on the cats that are crowded around Dawnkit, looking grave and somber] 20. (Out of all the cats) Fernkit: She's gone!
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