This is not an AU but I made a typo hehe,Ummm idk how to make a script in the project so…. Anyway! (If I don’t reply within 3 days then it’s a no) This is a mediocre to pro map! SCRIPT ————————————————————————— Part 1: (green leaf) Brokenstar is on the high rock telling nightpelt and all the elders that they are exiled from the clan.(The elders are all the cats in the refs except for clawface and Brokenstar) @_-F3rnsh4de-_ (done!) Part 2: (green leaf) Nightpelt looks at him with anger and they are about to leave the camp. Clawface is in the background staring at them with a smirk. (Zoom in to him) Part 3: (green leaf) show Nightpelt’s paw stepping out and zoom up to his face where he looks back and sees his brother walking toward him. @bramble_fern1324 (done!) Part 4:( green leaf ) Claw face whispers in his ear “I can make you feel alive” while the background gets darker. Nightpelt says “I know” and turns his face to the dirtplace. Part 5: ( green leaf)Nightpelt walks away with the elders while lip syncing. “Ha ha ha ha” then make a headshot of Clawface disappointed and turns around to face camp. Then the screen turns black. Part 6: (leaf fall nightpelt ‘s den) Nightpelt and Ashfur are hunting a rabbit. Nightpelt pounces and coughs really loud and falls on the ground. The screen turns black again. @Emry2031 done! Part 7: (leaf bare) Poolcloud and nightpelt go on a patrol and a fox jumps out of nowhere and attacks poolcloud. “Am I done?” Side headshot of Night pelt screaming in fear to warn Poolcloud. Part 8: ( leaf bare) he runs toward the fox but he starts coughing again and it’s to late.the fox runs away. “When I slip” Pool cloud’s body falls to the ground. ( don’t make to much b10od) Part 9:(leaf bare) “ I can’t believe”Night’s face is slowly zooming in and bit by bit his expression is changing to a more crazy face and teary. ( similar to the tn) @MakoTheSeaRain (done!) Part 10:(leaf bare) “ I can’t believe this happened” he closes his eyes. Part 11: (leaf bare) “Wow” He opens his eyes and starts running back to his den and looks for Yellowfang. Part 12:(leaf bare) Yellowfang and all the cats in the little group, run with herbs to the body. Yellowfang looks at the body and she is unsure the herbs are going to work Part 13:(leaf bare) She lypsyncs “ no, no, no” and shakes her head. Nightpelt syncs “maybe a cup-“ and he grabs a random herb. WIP seen (due January 1st) Part 14: (leaf bare)he raps the herb on Poolcloud’s wound. (Throat) Part 15:(leaf bare) he realizes she is de and starts licking her while crying. (His mouth has b10od on it) Part 16:(leaf bare) Ashfur picks the body up. Part 17:(leaf bare) they all pick her up with devastation. Part 18: my part!!!! bird’s eye view of all of them walking while carrying the body back to camp. ( make a trail of blood behind them while the screen is zooming out slowly
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