Right arrow = next pic Left arrow = previous pic --Mobile-friendly!-- Tap on right side = next pic Tap on left side = previous pic ------------------------------------------------------------------------ I'm making a graphic novel with the intention of publishing it :D However, it's actually super hard to do so, and I've put a TON of work (along with friends and family) with worldbuilding, creating characters, storyline, and a ton of other stuff XDD So! Here are some pictures of behind the scenes, and I could super use some extra feedback and advice, from any who can ^w^ (Sorry for the booty quality, Scratch messes it up) 1. A simple sketch of the main protagonist, Loa. She's supposed to be fairly ordinary, if cluttered, but also has some super harsh anxiety and worry problems. 2. Another sketch of Kaine, another protagonist. He's goofy, somewhat charming, and altogether a fun guy to be around, but suffers with self-hatred and small amounts of depression. He masks it with comedy, as many do. 3. A sketch of Hera, your typical bully. More lies beneath the surface, as it does with every bully. 4. Clancy. He's arrogant on the outside, scarred on the inside, and altogether the pinnacle of masculinity (comment Got it! if you catch the reference XD) 5. A sketch of Tobias. He's a larger person with an equally large soul, always willing to help, but not go beyond boundaries set by himself or others (what's he doing that we're not...?) 6. Lizar, a fashion-obsessed vain person. But what exactly caused the obsession with trends...? Well, it'd be figured out sooner or later >:3 7. And finally, for the protagonists, we have Goma. She's willing to stick up for her friends, violently if necessary, but is inside plagued by doubts--do her friends really like her? 8. The main antagonist, Poison Dart. He's a scientist from a long line of similar crazy-smart people. He's made it possible for Traumors to enter this world, but how...? 9. Two of the main teachers, Mr. Roy and Mrs. Wingsnap. Roy's more chill and fun, while Mrs. Wingsnap is a bit harsher and strict. Both care equally for their students. 10. A design for a teleporter, a device used to travel in their world. 11. More notes on teleporters 12. A general map of their continent, which may be outdated now.... >< 13. Sketches for the first Traumor the group encounters on missions. 14. The Traumor with color :D 15. A sketch for Poison Dart's hired muscle. She's Teresa, and has been growing up on the streets since the day the Traumors plagued their world. She's tough, but inside, just cares for her friends. 16. Teresa with color :D 17. Glade, a strong, quiet person, who also just super cares for his friends (Teresa being one of them). 18. Here he is with color :D 19. A sketch of the final of the trio, Nema. She's small in stature but full of energy. 20. And here are Nema's colors. 21. And Poison Dart's new cape design (???) 22. Aaaaand because Nema originally looked like a combo between Goma and Loa, she got a redesign. She displays more of that sparky energy I imagined her having 23. Test panels, just for doodles :3 24. A buncha Loa 25. A buncha Kaine 26. A buncha Hera 27. A buncha Clancy 28. A buncha Tobias 29. A buncha Lizar 30. A buncha Goma 31. A buncha Poison Dart 32. Aaaaand the cover for the graphic novel (Y'all, did I cook....?) 33. A group pic for the main cast, with colors :3 Any and all feedback and advice is greatly appreciated!! :DDD
