Guys should this be the next MAP in my au?

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I haven't read A Vision of Shadows or The Broken Code, or anything else that has these characters or kind of storyline. So uh pls correct me if I get things wrong. TOOK ME A WHILE HERE LOL Here's the story: It's been a few moons since the Bloody Mary MAP, and Dovewing ended up having kits with Bumblestripe (Unwillingly), and they are Bristlefrost and some other cats idk (Even though Bristlefrost is canonically Ivypool and Fernsong's daughter) Later on, Dovewing has been secretly meeting Tigerstar, and has Shadowsight. As Shadowsight gets a bit older, he follows his dad in meeting his mom. Ashfur (Who is dead cuz Hollyleaf k!lled him a long time ago) is plotting revenge against Squirrelflight and Bramblestar because Squilf didn't love him. He knows about Ivypool, so he sneaks into the Dark Forest and meets her. He makes a deal with her that if she comes with him in the living world, he will take on Bramblestar's body and she takes on Dovewing's body, and he will make her his new deputy, he removes Squirrelflight's role as deputy, but does not exile her, because he has plans. Ivypool stops Dovewing from meeting Tigerstar and Dovewing chases after her through the forest. Ivypool k!lls her, and takes her body. She's happy having power in ThunderClan after Ashfur as Bramblestar makes her deputy, even while despising certain cats. Ashfur is unaware that Ivypool will take advantage of him, and in the end, she betrays him, but while doing so, they are interrupted by Bristlefrost and Shadowsight, who attack them, winning. Ivypool retreats Dovewing's body and goes back into the Dark Forest, and Dovewing returns. While Ashfur returns to StarClan, but is unwelcome and ends up in the Dark Forest with Ivypool. Bramblestar is back in his old body. ( Bristlefrost and Shadowsight interrupt them because both "Bramblestar" and "Dovewing" have been acting strange. Shadowsight came to Bristlefrost telling her that they are half-siblings, and that he was visited by Dovewing's ghost and he fears that something very bad is going to happen if they don't stop Ashfur and Ivypool) Both ShadowClan and ThunderClan learn about everything, and they are glad that Shadowsight and Bristlefrost defeated them, but they put up guards for the next time that Ivypool, Ashfur, or the Dark Forest could return... Anyone need a breather?