Khelkan redesigns please!

Instructions

These characters I feel just aren't good enough or are too much, so I'm hoping someone could help me fix them using THE SAME traits and gender selected for each(capitalized for emphasis). Please read everything! {In order} 1. Dune Reason for redesign: very basic and not really unique Additional notes: Please give her a better name, preferably translatable from the Khelkan dictionary 2. Eissanchant Reason for redesign: I felt he could use a more unique pattern layout Additional notes: none 3. Jainacai Reason for redesign: Very basic, could be more unique Additional notes: Keep the colors fairly the same (darker tones/shades), keep the ring mark on her arm 4. Vaunkaiu Reason for redesign: Very basic, a bit too bright Additional notes: keep colors fairly the same (lighter tones/shades), keep ring mark on his arm 5. Liusannk Reason for redesign: The luminescence is all over the place, the markings are too basic, and it's very unorganized Additional notes: none 6. Katinhul Reason for redesign: the overall design is very basic, and I want a bit more patterning to take up space Additional notes: stick to purple rather than blue (some is ok) 7. Zyanti Reason for redesign: patterns are too basic Additional notes: stick to blue rather than purple (some is ok) {Some guidelines} >Please keep it mostly flat/minimal shading unless necessary (for example, using on Intikansa is ok to help her appear glowing) >No, you are not keeping these, just helping me out >No hate on my art >No AI art >If I decline, don't take it out on me >You are allowed to use the given Khelkan bases, but aren't required to. >I may not take the design, and if that is the case you can keep it and I will pay you back with a full of one character for the inconvenience {Ok, so what do YOU get?} >I'm willing to offer making customs, busts, or full-bodies of characters, and you get to pick the amount you think is fair! Since busts are easier, I'll do a minimum of 3. For fullbodies, my starting offer is 2. As for customs, you start with one because they are harder. >For the customs, please give me some ideas. You do not have to tell me every single one, but some examples include: color (can be one color or a pallet), species (mythical or non-mythical, key traits (like many eyes, fuzzy ears, etc.), preferred markings (runettes, stripes, etc.), a moodboard (please link the moodboard), or a specific theme (like angel-themed). >If you choose to add new accessories, I will add one extra to one of your return payments based on the accessory sizing, detail, and amount. {Form} User no @ | which character are you redesigning? | what are you wanting in return? | custom at all? (include some ideas) | moodboard for custom (link) | how much time do you think you'll need? | should my payment be on base or off base? (you pick!) | did you read everything? | are you sure? | any suggestions? | questions? |