[rant summary: this episode feels the same as 15, but it needs to happen to be a bridge between 15 and 17 (17 is a very climactic whoah everyones woww kinda episode) should I rewrite 16 to just become what 17 is and have these two conversations at the beginning really quickly? or keep it as-is? HELP IS NEEDED AHH (also Sapphire might never come back again I haven't thought that far ahead, but considering they're a long time friend of Granite, it's possible they will come back)] g ok uh yall... literally just had this revelation in the middle of writing the description, but this episode isn't super interesting because it's kinda just extra stuff/filler/it was too much to put inbetween 15 and 17 but not all that engaging because IT DOESN'T HAVE A CLEAR CLIMAX BUT um I might try to combine 16 and 17, so I'm sharing this for now because I might not and I want it to seem like I'm working on stuff, but this is mostly worldbuilding stuff and it might need to be rewritten. um but yeah, still get this done and all but be ready for a potential rewrite???? Perhaps??? I literally got so busy once school started again ToT Jazz band every monday and wed and taekwondo every tuesday and thursday but I might go skiing on thursday so perhaps tuesday and friday but i also auditioned for the pit orchestra for the school musical so who know if i'll get in but crossing fingers I'll still be breathing </3 but yeah, I did get this episode checked by my friend and she said it was fine, it's just not anything special. I know 17 is going to be really big or at least climactic and interesting, but this episode is still very needed as connection between 15 and 17? It just feels the same as 15 GUYS PLEASE HELP HHHHH IDK HOW TO MAKE IT FEEL DIFFERENT, ITS THE SAME CHARACTERS ACTING THE SAME WAY UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ok crashout over critique/tips/anything please
