“So we’re looking for a stout headed beetle (make up fancy insect name) , it should be around these parts somewhere.” Hansel said looking up from his book amethyst eyes darting around curiously. “Ughh why do we have to be here again?” A brunette girl groaned the heat obviously too much for her. “Can’t we just stay home?” She knew the answer already but this could be her lucky day. Why’d she have to dress so fancy today? With a sigh he closed his book. “Because Tamari, you own me a favor and I can’t have that dragon living with me anymore!” He whined. The dragon he was referring to has been “terrorizing” him constantly: asking him questions, taking bites of his food, making him disgusting dishes, annoying him, playing with him, hugging him… his pace noticeably slower he started sniffling. He really wanted to be home again. Noticing the look from his friend he cleared his throat pointing at the white hair girl right next to her. “P-plus we haven’t heard Anna complain at all!” Said girl perked up curiously. She looked at her friends no longer caring for the bugs she’d been messing with. She had been quiet during this trek taking in her surroundings with a laziness that was less a product of disinterest than just her usual demeanor. “It’s hot out.” She said with a blank stare. She wasn’t bothered by the heat but she wanted to side with Tamari. “We should go inside.” He stared at the two of them crossing his arms. “We’ll go back after we get the beetle because you two still owe me a favor.” He said not budging
can you tell I don't know how 2 write natural dialogue . Im more an artist than a writer tea bee etch
