Um... so i made 2 poems and wanted to share them. This is one of them. Let me know if you want the other one. Big Warning, poetry is not my thing so the writing might be trash. 'How Moon Loved Sun' "The Moon needs the Sun to shine" Oh yes, that's what they said But Moon remained defiant And ignored Sun instead "Tidal waves bow to me, Earth is my friend" "So why should i follow Sun when Sea calls me Mistress" Moon tried her best to shine on her own However, darkness is all she's known Sun, on the other hand, was sad He wanted to know why Moon ran upon sight So, Sun sought her out And found her atop the highest mountain Failing to shine her light And tears flowing like a fountain Sun took her freezing hand, in his flaming hand And soon the night sky gleamed "Let me help you shine" "I've never thought you lesser than me" "Not ever" Sun was kind to Moon Who found herself falling For the Celestial with a dazzling smile And while she froze him, and he burned her She became devoted to loving him And is how Moon started to love Sun That is how Moon loved Sun. Is this even a poem at this point i feel like after a certain time it turns into a story... anyways feedback and tips please?
This is an original poem by moi
