This is a fanfiction mixing two of my favorite Roblox games: Grace and Doors. It's inspired by a short story I wrote like two years ago. I plan for it to be short-ish, at least five chapters. Story below ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Soul didn't know what to do. They hadn't expected to be caught by the Lord, or even that He would be as angry as He was. All that they had tried to do was gain some power, and a few worshippers, just enough to be a true Archangel, like He has always said they were. They were pulled out of their thoughts when Caelum dragged them in front of the Lord. Soul fell to their knees, wings shaking. "My Lord, please, forgive me!" Caelum smacked them on the back of their head, chastising not to interrupt. "I will forgive you when you have been redeemed. For your Sin, you must make your way along the Path of Redemption. You must realize that power is not all that one requires. And you must realize that you are no idol. You cannot demand worship from the mortals." Soul's face fell. They knew what the Path of Redemption was. A cursed hotel where escape was never once guaranteed. "B-but, My Lord, I-" The Lord cut him off. "Begone! You will be returned when you have redeemed yourself in My eyes." And with that, Soul began their near-eternal journey along the Path.
Characters in this chapter: Soul The Lord Caelum ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Please feel free to review both the cover and the story! My plan is to write a chapter every week or so and use comments from the previous chapter as reference on where to improve.