the original poem is in the shape of an hourglass, I just can’t automatically format on scratch there’s no way i’m doing that by hand goodness i am so tired finished 03:37 (for civilian time it’s the same numbers just in AM), there are 3 more hours before i start feeling tired but there are the same amount of hours till i need to get ready for school.
the poem is supposed to be like time running out ig? like, stanzas break off in the middle of sentences which is supposed to give the reader the feeling of “gasping for air” aka this difficulty of keeping up, this lack of structure, a confusing jumble of words or at least it USED TO BE. because i changed the formatting so it doesn’t have that volatility anymore. just know that was my intention
