OK so uh this is so old lol I just never posted it. OK so I decided to go into more depth on these. OK so for number 4 I feel like hollyleaf complains more than she should like she was disappointed when she thought she was a part of the 3 and she was still disappointed when she found out she wasn't because at first she be wishing she could just have a normal life and when she finally can she isn't happy either?? Like obviously some shock is valid after both events but she just is over dramatic and kinda selfish. OK i disagree with my self a bit on number 1 because obviousisly Twigbranch was going to try to see violet shine alot but I felt like the dialog was the same each time.. and I know they didn't go to skyclan that much but still they went twice without any pause like, to be fair its been a while since I read a vision of shadows but I remember it a bit even though I may have got some details wrong. OK I'll explain the other two in another post so don't argue on 2 or 3 for now <3 byeeeee go eat a carrot or sum
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