I need to practice my art lol. But that aint the reason for this project :D This will only be shared for a little while! Im planning on writing a dystopian novel, and i need yall's opinion. TW! by the way but um i toned it down
Mkay so there's like five districts/fractions/whatever the heck you wanna call thems, and each one stands for something different. One of them (the government control or manipulation one, aka Embery) has this kinda evil president named Eisite, and the main character (Prior) is actually her niece, but she doesnt know. Well Eisite wants all blood relavites gone for whatever evil reason, and kicks Prior out of Embery. Prior is accepted by Loreite (Another district full of exiles) and there she becomes close friends with Septem (Who is actually being threatened to tell her that she is a mechanical error that shouldnt be alive, yada yada) Well Septem falls in love with her, and she loves him too, so close to the end of the book she confesses. Well, he's scared of his own feelings so he rejects her and she runs away and just so happens to stumble upon Eisite. (oh haha how did that happen) Eisite tells her that Septem (the only loved one she ever had) was lying to her and that Prior was just a human being with mental insanity. WELL PRIOR DIDNT TAKE THAT WELL! (TW HERE STOP READING IF YOU DISLIKE GORE) (Oh you kept reading alr here) : Prior wants to prove her wrong, so she slits her arm and rips out her veins, mistaking them for wires. Septems runs in and catches Prior and she dies in his arms. The end :) Lol the plot twist