THANKS SO MUCH WHITE MINER!
I changed a few things (stuff I think made it better) Just extra realism :) And White miner, I am NOT one of those people! I luv the og star wars short so much (just no where near as much as I luv real star wars!!!!!!!!!) I rounded the edge of the TIE fighter wings slightly, I added extra electricity to the blasts from the X wing, I added a person in the TIE fighter and I added extra white lines to the death star explosion!
