i'm just wondering if anyone is interested in giving me title ideas for this story or helping me change parts to make them better or potentially contributing a character I could write in because so far only 3 people have names This is what I have for plot in as brief of a summary as I can manage - so a village basically explodes, and all of the people are forced to move out and try to settle elsewhere - all of their efforts are thwarted, however, due to random problems arising for reasons that they don't understand (yet) - two of these people are girls named C & A (same initials as Cain and Abel but I'm just lazy and don't wanna write their full names...), and they've been best friends since they were born - C is obsessed with herself, taking pride in being appointed the leader of the civilians and making most decisions to save her own skin rather than anyone else's - A is in love with her, but has convinced herself that C can never love anyone other than herself so she gives up the chase and just pines sadly - C meets this guy that she immediately falls head over heels for (because he's pretty, she's pretty, kinda like Fiyero and Glinda) - A doesn't trust him, both because of a twinge of jealousy and also because ever since he showed up, they've been met with a significant increase in disasters - A gets even more suspicious when prince guy suddenly asks C to marry him despite knowing her for all of a few weeks - C doesn't like that A isn't supporting her because A always has, so they have a big argument and C decides that "because A won't accept her when she's finally happy, she doesn't need to be around" - A is torn apart mentally after C leaves with her new fiance, and soon figures out that her suspicions of the guy were correct and they need to save C - Before they can do that, prince guy captures the group and enslaves them, telling them his ploy to sacrifice C to his corrupt God for power and eternal life - C also (unintentionally) finds out about his ploy and sort of realizes that her misguided judgement means she really isn't perfect at all and in reality she's kind of a bad person, so she decides that she's going to make a decision for the greater good for once and attempts to free the group - Prince man stops her and gets really mad so he locks her away and promises that if she won't cooperate, he'll take everything from her until she does...spoiler alert, she doesn't give in, and he takes A's life right in front of her - C has a breakdown after A's death and realizes then that she'd been in love with A but was too focused on her own vanity that she had disregarded it as meaningless friendship - C is emotionally vulnerable so prince-y boy slides in and manipulates her into marrying him again - but actually she devises a plan for vengeance and strikes him down before he can succeed in his race for power - she frees the village and they're finally able to start a new life without constant fear of threats (because evil guy is gone!) yeesh I tried to be brief and it was still really long, wow
