Decided to post my re-write of the Prolouge. (WILL NOT BE POSTING ANYMORE CHAPTERS) Will post lore and characters!
PROLOUGE- Leri ⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫ At about 2:00, I was woken up by the sound of the ship’s alert system, an abrupt, repetitive, chiming noise. Obnoxious, but effective. And it only went off in the upper section of the ship. After throwing on some clothes; a grey tanktop, my penguin socks, and my most worn pair of cargo pants, I sprinted to the ship's dash to check it out. When I got to the control room, Ona and Fen were already there checking it out, both hunched over the main panel. That didn't surprise me, I was always the slow one.. What did, was the color of the notification. Green. A planet. Not some malfunction, or a satalite needing repairs, but a planet. No, not just a planet, a whole system. Water, Plants. Ecosystems. This could be a brand new start for humanity; a brand new earth. “Ona!” I shouted from across the room, my voice high pitched with adrenaline. “Leri. Come look at this.” If it wasn’t for how excited I was, her tone would’ve worried me. It was too heavy for such good news. But at that moment, I didn't think anything could ruin this. When I got to the dashboard, she whispered, as if someone else was listening: “It has a name.” What? Only humans could name the items on the chart. If this has been named, then why doesn't anyone know about it? Why aren't humans on it right now? I looked at the icon. Above a symbol of a galaxy was some sort of word. A string of vertical symbols, but not in English. Or any common language. It seemed to be… encrypted? “What does it say?” I asked, only after realizing that Ona wouldn’t know that either. “Rio’s on that right now. He should be done in a few hours.” She responded dully, following with “The system didn't detect any intelligent lifeforms, so there aren't any humans. After all, it has never been wrong before.” “Are we going in?” “Might as well. Fen, would you do the honors?” He nods, walks over to the control, and calmly swipes forward. Even in a situation like this, Fen always manages to keep his calm. Just like that, we had entered a new galaxy. A new era… After "Aeons" of wandering. ⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫⯏⬫⯎⬫ Aeons hehehehe
