it was cool. better then mario 2 BUT it has osmuch flaws. 1 THE PROTAGONIST DOSENT DIE. LIKE BRO what is the POINT? i felt slight sadness until i saw he was alive. i said out loud "WAIT HE AINT DEAD??" im so dissapointed. the pods are intaresting but it could have been so much better. like give the poku some love bro. they look like if hamsters and squirrles descided to combine and go for a Pixar career. the birds are cool. the fire wolf... idk the voice feels wrong somehow. it should be deeper. idk how to say it. it should sound more tired?? also the beginning sucks, they could have made that flashback before we even knew what it meant. it could have neeb a "wait a minute..." moment. like after that flashback we could cut to the father saying they are starving (to get us really in the story. also i love that they make starvation evident.) THEN we can see him go out with the birds and SEE that they are eating their food. that order would have been better. also it would have been cool if the Bird gal in the end turned herself into a firewolf too to help the poku. i feel like the lesson should have been "YES you CAN be dumb BUT fixing it and LEARINIG is what makes you a good person and if you just cry like a baby about it you will never fix ANYTHING." also the fire wolf sotry could have been told by the fish guy (aka wolf boi) i feel like it would make us sus. ALSO this would have been better as a series i think. to get us more personally into the story.
