Okay, so I just finished the first chapter of my story, which currently has no title Click/Space/Arrow Keys to read the first chapter Also please read the entire Notes and Credits Section Oh and: the things in * * mean italics, because Scratch text doesn't support italics
Here is the overview of the story: The year is 2202. Aaron (the main character) first finds a projection of a map that doesn’t correspond with anywhere on the planet or in fiction through a gadget. Then, on a school field trip to the biggest tech company in the world, Radian, Aaron and his assigned partners find the same map, but it’s a physical map this time. They are suddenly forced to go into a restricted area to escape a fire in the building. This restricted area leads to “the underground”. So does a story like that seem interesting? Also, remember, this is my first draft, so it's not going to be perfect. So, don't immediately jump into critiquing my writing style unless you have a grammar tip or something Also, here's the link to a project that has the character profiles of all the main characters in this story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1295179721 Lastly, do any of y'all have title suggestions? Because I'm sick of it being "[Insert Title Here]" lol