Hey guys! Here’s a little survey for my comic, Star of Darkness. I’m curious to hear your thoughts about the story so far since we’re approaching the start of the main plot (*cough* what you heard nothing *cough*) Read the first chapter here! ^^ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1260133009 >>> IMPORTANT: please remix with your answers! It’s much easier for me to review feedback that way than in a comment <3 Some questions are for me to analyze how effective the plot has been, so please give me your honest feedback! ^v^ Dw, I’m not going to take anything personally lol the purpose of this survey is so that I can improve my storytelling abilities! <3 Q1 - Do you have a favorite character? If so, why them? (a funny line they said, being able to relate to them, etc) Q2 - Do you have a least favorite character? Why them? Q3 - What do you predict will happen based on what’s happened so far in the story? Q4 - What are you worried will happen? Q5 - Is there a character that you believe is hiding something? If so, what do you think it is? (if you don’t have any idea that’s fine too lol <3) Q6 - Would you prefer shorter chapters that post more frequently, or longer chapters that post less frequently? Q7 - Do you have any questions about the story so far? (That are related to the plot. Any other questions about like, how I came up with the story can be asked on my profile lol <3) ** **I will not be answering questions about the story that could spoil the plot; this is just so that I can get an idea of how well I’m hiding future reveals ^^ Q8 - If you could keep one character from harm for the entirety of the story, who would it be? No one is a valid answer too lol (Answers will most likely not affect what happens, sorry! ^^” I’m just evil like that muehehe) Q9 - Does the plot make sense so far? (Is it easy/hard to follow, are perspective switches confusing, is the pacing too slow or fast, etc, plus what you’d suggest I do/have done differently!) Q10 - Was there a scene that stands out? How come? Q11 - Do you think the characters are realistic? (Are their motivations clear, does their dialouge seem natural, do they have a bland or interesting personality, etc) Q12 - Any other thoughts you’d like to share? (Overall effectiveness, clarity, intrigue, or anything else about the story! Please share any thoughts that you think I could improve on <3)
Also just some life updates below- this isn't related to the survey! ^^ I'm finally out of school, so my activity will start to pick up! Still a bit burnt out from finals season, and I'm super super sorry that it's been over 2 months since I've posted a chapter 0.o Chapter 6 is still only in the sketch phase, and I am excited to change that soon! Since it's been so long, I want the next chapter to make up for this wait, so I will be combining chapter 6 and...oh no I just realize what I've done. Do....not....say it....... UGH ok but like...chapter 6 will be twice as long so don't get excited because it probably won't come out until like, mid June lol. Uhm yeah...so since productions still a little slow for right now I thought I'd post some SoD content to keep yalls fed. Okay a survey might not be what you'd have in mind but uhm. there's art at least :3 even if its lwk ugly sob Gosh I haven't made art of that girl in months... I mean I've been doodling her in my sketchbook but does that count. Uhm also tech week for my show is in 3 weeks...help what do I do.... Alr welll I'm functioning with 6 hours of sleep I'm really tired so I'm going to hop of scratch for a bit lol love yall <33 /plat
