This is just some constructive criticism for your lines. I can only find one thing: The last line, the *gasp* could be a bit louder, more audible, and exaggerated. Everything else is good, I put the final lines that are accepted into the final dubbed version in this project. You're doing amazing, keep up the good work, and good job! I'd love it if you could remix this project with the new gasp. (love the bloopers btw)
