This is just some constructive criticism for your lines. Your tones are amazing, and you did everything very well without much explaining for your first time. Here are some things that you can do better: 1. Line 2 part 1, you rushed the 'rabbit,' so it isn't that clear. I'd love it if you could re-record that one and maybe slow down the 'rabbit or something.' 2. Line 8, 'Wouldn't you like to know' ends in a question mark, so I'd like it if you made it sound more like a question than a statement. Everything else is good, I put the final lines that are accepted into the final dubbed version in this project. You're doing amazing, keep up the good work, and good job! I'd love it if you could remix this project with the changes. Thank you so much for being part of our journey to Sixpence Dubbed!
