This is just some constructive criticism for your lines. 1) For line 1, 'Well, I'm SOLD!' I'd like you to emphasize the 'sold' and have a little pause between 'Well' and the rest of the sentence. 2) Line 6, take 1 is amazing, I loved it, but it kind of glitched at the beginning. Can you retake it the same way please? 3) Line 7, take 2 is great, but your voice is a little too high in one part, which makes it sound really squeaky and unclear. Pacing is good though. 4) In line 8, take 3, I liked the 'Wowza!' but you dragged the 'hates' and 'guts'. Could you please try making it a bit faster to match with the rest of the sentence? 5) Line 9, take 2 is great and I love that one, except that the 'got' kind of sounds like 'get.' Could you try that again and make it a bit clearer? Everything else is good, I put the final lines that are accepted into the final dubbed version in this project. You're doing amazing, keep up the good work, and good job! I'd love it if you could remix this project with the changes. Thank you so much for being part of our journey to Sixpence Dubbed!
