This is just some constructive criticism for your lines. There is only one problem: In Line 9, the 'what're' could be more clear. Everything else is good, I put the final lines that are accepted into the final dubbed version in this project. You're doing amazing, keep up the good work, and good job! I'd love it if you could remix this project with the changes. Thank you so much for being part of our journey to Sixpence Dubbed!
