This is just some constructive criticism for your lines. 1) For line 1, still, the 'well' sounds a bit weird. Could you do 3 takes always, even for the RDOCC? 2) Line 6 is nice, but I'd like it if you could slow down the 'by the way' a bit. 3) I think you did a little too much, because the 'sixpence' is much, much lower than the rest of the sentences, which makes it sound weird and unnatural. 4) 'Wowza!' is nice, again, but the 'everyone' part is a bit too fast and squeaky and high for it to be clear to hear. Everything else is good, I put the final lines that are accepted into the final dubbed version in this project. You're doing amazing, keep up the good work, and good job! I'd love it if you could remix this project with the changes. Thank you so much for being part of our journey to Sixpence Dubbed!
