This is just some constructive criticism for your lines. 1) When you do your next version and remix, can you please not delete the final ones that I kept in the project? It will make it much easier for me. 2) For line 20, the 'stupid face' could be a bit clearer and slower. 3) Line 26, I'd like you to emphasize the 'not' in 'Absolutely not!' 4) For line 32, both takes are good with pacing, but take 1 is a bit too high, and take 2 is a bit too low, which makes it sound unenthusiastic. Everything else is good, I put the final lines that are accepted into the final dubbed version in this project. You're doing amazing, keep up the good work, and good job! I'd love it if you could remix this project with the changes, thanks!
