Well. Uh. This is my unfinished chapter one for a story that doesn't even have a name yet. Is it good..? I would like some feedback, other than the obvious word repetition, which I swear I tried to avoid— The main character's name is Pigeon Sterling. He prefers to go by the name Pidge. I won't reveal too much about him or why his name is Pigeon yet, lol. Then there's Ven Wintermute. Ven is... Ven. I won't reveal too much about him, either. By the way, without meaning to, I accidentally made these guys a lil' bit like Mercury and Venus in the sense that Pidge is pretty much little Hermes and Ven... WELL, HIS NAME IS VEN. And also he's mean as heck. BUT I SWEAR THEY AREN'T THE SAME LIKE AT ALL— All writing/characters owned by me @_The_True_Author_ Inspired me to share my writing on Scratch xd
