Long ago.. Moons before the great clans had formed... A kittypet by the name of Viper gained a Star, a soul-devouring star, that takes the stars of other cats to make them his slaves. Each soul he devoured made him more powerful... So he was feared by all cats in the land, so they gave him the title of leader, the name of Viperstar... It was the largest clan in Clan history and the first Clan too. Since Stars weren't that common, cats with stars were exiled from their homes in fear of what Viperstar would do to steal their Star. One of these exiled cats was a cat by the name of Flamestrike. Inferno Star was his star and the most powerful of all time. More powerful than Viperstar. And this enraged Viperstar all the way down to his core. Flamestrike formed a group of cats like him, and they called themselves the "Starkeepers". They challenged Viperstar to his face, and Viperstar accepted. They fought for hours, and finally, Viperstar was dead under Flamestrike's paw. They had won, and most of the souls stolen were free. But... Viperstar had followers, which caused 2 clans to form: Peakclan and WidowClan. They say that Viperstar's star will return and Flamestrike's star will too, but only Starclan knows who and when.
This took forever to make, but I like it. Do I need to change it? Is it good?
